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The Great Typo Hunt

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Have you found a typo anywhere in the resource pages, in the signup text, etc? List it here.

If you think something is written in a confusing manner, list that as well! Please only note typos and confusing section in the site text written by the staff, not IC posts.

The staff appreciates your help!







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Kaitlyn
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Roleplaying Tips: Everyone reading the thread probably remembers! *And if not, a short OOC note can fix that.
*Removed the ( ) to form a separate sentence, as the ! before it turns the add-on in to a fragment.

Character Creation: You’ll then be approved for creating a character profile thread (see next section)[.]

A character's profile thread is basically their application, and it is also where you keep track of the items, gold, spells, etc. that a character possesses.

Each player may have up to three of their characters start with the Jumpstart Bonus, which will add +150 gold and one minor to the normal total of 200 gold and three minors, making the characters’ new total 350 gold and four minors!

You can make up minors* or grab purchasable stuff with them.
*Staff will approve these minors, and/or work with you to iron out a tweaked minor that fits your desires. <- I can see either the note being smaller and a line down or just included as a normal sentence with the *’s removed as being less weird.
    The sidenote may look better (ie. less like yet another main note) if bumped another ul over (and therein, wouldn’t need the title: to ID it). Why does the list break in two right above there? The last “we” bullet would make more sense if it were moved down to share the same paragraph as the second “we” chunk as well.

Give your PC mundane stuff that makes sense for them - leather armor, iron weapons, rations, cooking equipment, musical instruments, etc[.] generally don't cost starting gold or take up minor slots.

All PCs start with 200g, 2 aspects, *3 Minors (see below), and can have several other non-magical possessions as well.
*Removed the first “and” since the list did not end there.

Let’s put it this way: sometimes his target ended up with more money than they started with.

This man, George the Example NPC, was kind enough to start teaching Bill magic over the years (granted, that might have been because he felt guilty about how little he was paying him).

Skills and Abilities
*Aspect: True Mage
*Took out space between lines here.

This is a bit on the weak side, so let's count this as only ~2/3 a minor.
*Bow of Omens[In Sack]
*Also took out an extra space between lines here.

*There are many different ways you might format the spell section, and other players may appreciate it if you include the descriptions of how the spells work (it might make remembering what your PC can do easier for you as well**).
*The ^ is a little redundant, considering said text is already in the same subsection and mentions spell formatting.
**Removed the extra !.


...balancing that out with a little more power elsewhere is okay as well..[.] BUT! ...drawbacks that would make your PC annoying to play or interact with (mute, can't work with other people due to a curse, explodes in sunlight, deadly allergy to grass, etc)...
    Used ... to shorten and focus on typos since it was a big chunk.







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