07-13-2018, 02:54 PM
My opinions and suggestions:
- Being able to smell specific types of corpses from about a mile away is niche, but powerful enough to be a minor. (1 Minor)
- Wings ability is probably two minors... and I'd like to tweak the wording...
Wings - Szonja’s wings are more functional than that of most bird shifters, allowing her greater range of movement through the air. Flapping her arms in strong motion allows her to double the height of her leaps in addition to any other effects. In addition, while in her shifted form, her instinct for the movement and placement of her wings aids in her command of storm magics. Every other post, so long as it is being used to aid her movement, Szonja may cast a storm spell without it costing her spell for the post. (3 Minors Total)
Suggested
-Battle Vulture - Vultures are scavengers, but they know how to fight for their claim. As long as Szonja is in her shifted form when fighting she gains a small bonus to her number of battle posts at the end of a fight, determined by the moderator of the event. This bonus is capped at double. (4 Minors Total)
- Being able to smell specific types of corpses from about a mile away is niche, but powerful enough to be a minor. (1 Minor)
- Wings ability is probably two minors... and I'd like to tweak the wording...
Wings - Szonja’s wings are more functional than that of most bird shifters, allowing her greater range of movement through the air. Flapping her arms in strong motion allows her to double the height of her leaps in addition to any other effects. In addition, while in her shifted form, her instinct for the movement and placement of her wings aids in her command of storm magics. Every other post, so long as it is being used to aid her movement, Szonja may cast a storm spell without it costing her spell for the post. (3 Minors Total)
Suggested
-Battle Vulture - Vultures are scavengers, but they know how to fight for their claim. As long as Szonja is in her shifted form when fighting she gains a small bonus to her number of battle posts at the end of a fight, determined by the moderator of the event. This bonus is capped at double. (4 Minors Total)