12-24-2015, 01:18 AM
(This post was last modified: 12-25-2015, 04:31 AM by Magikeeper.)
Well, first off: I changed grand opening bonus to +350/2 minors. So +100g!
That said:
Hammer Space: Please give this a different name Udo.
Other than that, I suppose this is okay.
Shaded Eye: This is fine.
Piercing Sacrament: I think this is allowable, a bit on the strong side (not counting the third ability, since that doesn't actually make it stronger) however. I also feel like noting to anyone reading this that I created that weapon on a different site.
Wanderer's Suit: This might be incredibly strong, somewhat strong, or not that powerful. Are you going for how it worked on the original Kage?
B.O.S.S: Summons are a lot weaker in AS than they were in nEW, I think Vengeance would be an incredibly powerful ability in AS.
Some changes here:
> Vortexes: This is mostly fluff now, so that's fine.
> Loyal/Homebound: Could be added later on.
> Kaia's Backstory: Currently references the BoK trials. I am fine with that existing in AS (in some form or another), but some tweaking is definitely needed here.
> Hrm, will we allow Haunted as a single minor? I'd really rather it count as two, as the extra power should be stronger than a single minor (350g value).
Perhaps we could drop Wanderer's Suit (or just specify it is only capable of minor tweaks - not that useful for disguises), have B.O.S.S. be two minors, and the tweak the vengeance power? I'm thinking of her having a weaker form (Like a Nebula Dream Sprite), but it being at will (takes a post or two to recover from being dispersed though) and 1/encounter magic-suction (as before) that grants some sort of extra benefit. Perhaps she becomes fully solid for 10 posts and.. hrm... something else. Anything in particular you'd like?
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Backstory, Description: His description still notes the Ledgewalker's Cloak.
That said:
Hammer Space: Please give this a different name Udo.
Other than that, I suppose this is okay.
Shaded Eye: This is fine.
Piercing Sacrament: I think this is allowable, a bit on the strong side (not counting the third ability, since that doesn't actually make it stronger) however. I also feel like noting to anyone reading this that I created that weapon on a different site.
Wanderer's Suit: This might be incredibly strong, somewhat strong, or not that powerful. Are you going for how it worked on the original Kage?
B.O.S.S: Summons are a lot weaker in AS than they were in nEW, I think Vengeance would be an incredibly powerful ability in AS.
Some changes here:
> Vortexes: This is mostly fluff now, so that's fine.
> Loyal/Homebound: Could be added later on.
> Kaia's Backstory: Currently references the BoK trials. I am fine with that existing in AS (in some form or another), but some tweaking is definitely needed here.
> Hrm, will we allow Haunted as a single minor? I'd really rather it count as two, as the extra power should be stronger than a single minor (350g value).
Perhaps we could drop Wanderer's Suit (or just specify it is only capable of minor tweaks - not that useful for disguises), have B.O.S.S. be two minors, and the tweak the vengeance power? I'm thinking of her having a weaker form (Like a Nebula Dream Sprite), but it being at will (takes a post or two to recover from being dispersed though) and 1/encounter magic-suction (as before) that grants some sort of extra benefit. Perhaps she becomes fully solid for 10 posts and.. hrm... something else. Anything in particular you'd like?
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Backstory, Description: His description still notes the Ledgewalker's Cloak.