12-25-2015, 04:19 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-16-2016, 11:37 PM by Magikeeper.)
Okay, after we've fixed some rune information >.>, Dream is 75g. We aren't going to be allowing trading gold for minors-you-can't-buy, but Wanderer's Suit is basically the dream rune power on a bodysuit [in some ways a little stronger, in other ways a little weaker], so just drop 75g and you can have that without it counting as a minor.
I see you combined the weapons together.
That brings us to 5 minors:
> Shaded Eye: Fine
> Deep Pockets: Fine
> B.O.S.S: Definitely Counts as 3 minors, is really strong. At least, if the Haunted ability was tweaked to be at the power level I feel it should be at for a Master Rune.
...Alright, change up the gold for the suit, and change B.O.S.S. to this:
Blade of Sacramental Skies (B.O.S.S.) – A black Eternal Ice kila dagger with a dark navy crystalline grip. The dagger's blade is unusual in that it is both 6" long and four-edged instead of the three.
<ul>Ritual Shroud - The blade can shroud itself with a black cloudy aura that forms a multitude of tiny swirling vortexes of darkness within an inch of it. The vortexes obscure light that passes through them, effectively blurring vision. The swirls linger for a post or until willed otherwise, making it possible to leave trails of innumerable little vortexes with each swing.
Flip of the Four Deadly Priests - The dagger's edges can be willed to open like a flower, tearing through anything in their way with Strong strength. The opening blades then proceed to lean against the hilt, sliding forward and flowing together in a drill-like motion as the blade regains its former shape.
Lashing of the Master's Tongue - The blade can be willed to detach from the hilt, remaining connected by a nevermelt-ice chain that can be flowed into and out of the hilt to a maximum length of 3'. Willing the chain to completely flow back into the hilt reconnects the blade, as though it and the hilt were a single solid whole. Detaching the blade is not forceful, I.E. it doesn't shoot out like a gun, although swinging it while detaching it will obviously have an effect.
Faithless Butterfly - The hilt's ornamentation reflects the antithesis of the religious beliefs of the last sapient creature whose living heart was torn asunder by the dagger's blade. Currently depicts lunar imagery combined with people and beasts of all shapes and sizes holding hands and happily dancing about.
Runes: Haunted
<ul><li>Haunted Spirit: The soul of Kaia Alliel resides within the blade. Her presence also grants the weapon the following ability:</li>
Rogue Nebula: Kaia may will a small cloud of smoke to seethe forth from the dagger. This smoke, a dark nebula of blacks, purples, and blues, quickly dissipates; leaving behind a solid, smoke-clothed fairy of hardened nebula. The 8" tall summon is completely controlled by Kaia, she can feel through it, talk, fly, etc, and has Weak strength. The summon dissipates if it moves more than 10' from the blade, or if it is dealt a "mortal" wound. Kaia can't use this ability again for 5 posts if the summon is forcefully dispersed in such a manner. The summon gains an additional (staff approved) ability for each rune added to the B.O.S.S. Note: The summon basically looks like a dream sprite, but this is only superficial.</ul>
Doesn't have the magic suction any more, difficult to make that work with the rest as one power, but I know you weren't a stickler on that and the new bonus power is a quite a bit stronger (The summon won't ever be wading through combat taking out foes on single-handily but it'll surely be very noticeable 4 runes in).
I'll think about her backstory, but since that's on me I could approve the PC with the changes I suggested.
I see you combined the weapons together.
That brings us to 5 minors:
> Shaded Eye: Fine
> Deep Pockets: Fine
> B.O.S.S: Definitely Counts as 3 minors, is really strong. At least, if the Haunted ability was tweaked to be at the power level I feel it should be at for a Master Rune.
...Alright, change up the gold for the suit, and change B.O.S.S. to this:
Blade of Sacramental Skies (B.O.S.S.) – A black Eternal Ice kila dagger with a dark navy crystalline grip. The dagger's blade is unusual in that it is both 6" long and four-edged instead of the three.
<ul>Ritual Shroud - The blade can shroud itself with a black cloudy aura that forms a multitude of tiny swirling vortexes of darkness within an inch of it. The vortexes obscure light that passes through them, effectively blurring vision. The swirls linger for a post or until willed otherwise, making it possible to leave trails of innumerable little vortexes with each swing.
Flip of the Four Deadly Priests - The dagger's edges can be willed to open like a flower, tearing through anything in their way with Strong strength. The opening blades then proceed to lean against the hilt, sliding forward and flowing together in a drill-like motion as the blade regains its former shape.
Lashing of the Master's Tongue - The blade can be willed to detach from the hilt, remaining connected by a nevermelt-ice chain that can be flowed into and out of the hilt to a maximum length of 3'. Willing the chain to completely flow back into the hilt reconnects the blade, as though it and the hilt were a single solid whole. Detaching the blade is not forceful, I.E. it doesn't shoot out like a gun, although swinging it while detaching it will obviously have an effect.
Faithless Butterfly - The hilt's ornamentation reflects the antithesis of the religious beliefs of the last sapient creature whose living heart was torn asunder by the dagger's blade. Currently depicts lunar imagery combined with people and beasts of all shapes and sizes holding hands and happily dancing about.
Runes: Haunted
<ul><li>Haunted Spirit: The soul of Kaia Alliel resides within the blade. Her presence also grants the weapon the following ability:</li>
Rogue Nebula: Kaia may will a small cloud of smoke to seethe forth from the dagger. This smoke, a dark nebula of blacks, purples, and blues, quickly dissipates; leaving behind a solid, smoke-clothed fairy of hardened nebula. The 8" tall summon is completely controlled by Kaia, she can feel through it, talk, fly, etc, and has Weak strength. The summon dissipates if it moves more than 10' from the blade, or if it is dealt a "mortal" wound. Kaia can't use this ability again for 5 posts if the summon is forcefully dispersed in such a manner. The summon gains an additional (staff approved) ability for each rune added to the B.O.S.S. Note: The summon basically looks like a dream sprite, but this is only superficial.</ul>
Doesn't have the magic suction any more, difficult to make that work with the rest as one power, but I know you weren't a stickler on that and the new bonus power is a quite a bit stronger (The summon won't ever be wading through combat taking out foes on single-handily but it'll surely be very noticeable 4 runes in).
I'll think about her backstory, but since that's on me I could approve the PC with the changes I suggested.