01-04-2016, 03:56 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-04-2016, 04:23 AM by Magikeeper.)
This is a pretty nice profile! I have some questions, though:
1) What are her spells? I recall you were going to RP her learning them, but can you list what spells she is in the process of learning?
2) On lions - I should first ask where you want to go with this. The main concern is that lions are, on one hand, fairly powerful. But on the other hand it will be hard to have lions traveling with you everywhere and they aren't sword-proof. I'd suggest going with one magical lioness that has some means of overcoming the how-do-I-take-this-through-town and people-are-going-to-focus-on-attacking-the-lion-because-seriously-it's-a-lion.
Edit: Oh, you intend for them to be mini-lions (large dog sized). Yeah, just mention that and I'll let that pass as two minors.
3) Noted in chat that she's basically just staying in hybrid form 24/7, which is fine. She would still have the ability to take a full human form, should she ever find a use for that.
4) Where is she from? Probably not Delvena, since being a non-royal deer would mean her family either is an unrelated deer family line (seems to be the case), split off from well before the regime change, or one or more of her ancestors was exiled. Given her history, probably...hrm.. I'd say northwestern woods except for the lions given the new information, I definitely suggest northwestern woods. Herbivore shifters normally come from the south, but Moriba strikes me as being more northwestern woods culture-wise.
5) Gold would be 400-180 = 220.
6) Now that we've covered the lions, she still has 4 minors left (3+2 for grand opening -1 for strength)! I recommend..hrm.. actually, maybe have the lions be twins that were born with slow regeneration? That might come up sometime and I'd count it as 1.5 minors (for other people reading this, I'd count it as 1.5 minors for a pair of large-dog-sized pets. Not your PC
). It basically would allow them to help more in combat without their lack of long-term injury straining credibility. Have another .5 be the enveloping rune bag, which I just sort of suggest to everyone it seems, and that leaves 2 minors for.. hrm..
7) Wait, you edited in the spells in place of the Tempest Knight levels 1-3. She should have both.
1) What are her spells? I recall you were going to RP her learning them, but can you list what spells she is in the process of learning?
2) On lions - I should first ask where you want to go with this. The main concern is that lions are, on one hand, fairly powerful. But on the other hand it will be hard to have lions traveling with you everywhere and they aren't sword-proof. I'd suggest going with one magical lioness that has some means of overcoming the how-do-I-take-this-through-town and people-are-going-to-focus-on-attacking-the-lion-because-seriously-it's-a-lion.
Edit: Oh, you intend for them to be mini-lions (large dog sized). Yeah, just mention that and I'll let that pass as two minors.
3) Noted in chat that she's basically just staying in hybrid form 24/7, which is fine. She would still have the ability to take a full human form, should she ever find a use for that.
4) Where is she from? Probably not Delvena, since being a non-royal deer would mean her family either is an unrelated deer family line (seems to be the case), split off from well before the regime change, or one or more of her ancestors was exiled. Given her history, probably...hrm.. I'd say northwestern woods except for the lions given the new information, I definitely suggest northwestern woods. Herbivore shifters normally come from the south, but Moriba strikes me as being more northwestern woods culture-wise.
5) Gold would be 400-180 = 220.
6) Now that we've covered the lions, she still has 4 minors left (3+2 for grand opening -1 for strength)! I recommend..hrm.. actually, maybe have the lions be twins that were born with slow regeneration? That might come up sometime and I'd count it as 1.5 minors (for other people reading this, I'd count it as 1.5 minors for a pair of large-dog-sized pets. Not your PC
). It basically would allow them to help more in combat without their lack of long-term injury straining credibility. Have another .5 be the enveloping rune bag, which I just sort of suggest to everyone it seems, and that leaves 2 minors for.. hrm..7) Wait, you edited in the spells in place of the Tempest Knight levels 1-3. She should have both.