06-28-2018, 11:39 PM
The whole curving lines make things confusing. Does it curve away from you? Up? Around you? If the intent was it goes up, then rises might be more appropriate. Also, this wording doesn't say the wall would be in front of you like a T it implies a l instead.
5, decent.
6, see above for clairty things.
7, hmm. seems fun. maybe flip with 6 and make the wall better?
8, effect doesnt seem like its worth the slot at 8. if you leave 7 where it is, you could combine the two. passive effect with the option to create more?
9, i like the alternate more. feels more like frozone or iceman and fits the theme of making ice do your bidding.
10, i like it. you could even add that you move faster on this super frozen ice.
5, decent.
6, see above for clairty things.
7, hmm. seems fun. maybe flip with 6 and make the wall better?
8, effect doesnt seem like its worth the slot at 8. if you leave 7 where it is, you could combine the two. passive effect with the option to create more?
9, i like the alternate more. feels more like frozone or iceman and fits the theme of making ice do your bidding.
10, i like it. you could even add that you move faster on this super frozen ice.