06-29-2018, 09:06 PM
6, is the snow loose? packed? can someone lean against it? Also, still have a really odd shape description. It sounds like you are describing a half pipe.
7, you don't quite say how thick the ice is. is it strong enough to support itself freely? how far off the wall can it go before it needs another connection? what size gap can it safely cross?
8, solves all the issues. I like it
9, might want to be clearer that its not one point or every point. I'm pretty sure the intent is that effectively you burst snow in a circle. you just have control if its the full circle or if there are slices missing to dodge allies and the like. wording "any or all" kinda makes it sound like a slice or the whole circle
10, should probably say the painful ice doesn't hurt you. and, technically, snow is ice. so would be better to say the snow solidifies into a block or something.
7, you don't quite say how thick the ice is. is it strong enough to support itself freely? how far off the wall can it go before it needs another connection? what size gap can it safely cross?
8, solves all the issues. I like it
9, might want to be clearer that its not one point or every point. I'm pretty sure the intent is that effectively you burst snow in a circle. you just have control if its the full circle or if there are slices missing to dodge allies and the like. wording "any or all" kinda makes it sound like a slice or the whole circle
10, should probably say the painful ice doesn't hurt you. and, technically, snow is ice. so would be better to say the snow solidifies into a block or something.