01-13-2016, 12:39 AM
(This post was last modified: 01-13-2016, 02:09 AM by Magikeeper.)
Hello Nakaiya!
While I am not staff, I can help you get some of the basics set for them to look over. Edit: Thanks Udo. I've gone over things more thoroughly in the next post. - Magikeeper
First, your spells are incorrect. You need to specify which spells you have purchased, not which arts. You should also mention which level your LT is and not just its name. Just see my post, I detail the spell situation pretty thoroughly, I think. -MK
Second, it seems you are missing quite a lot of gold, and it doesn't really reflect on your sheet as to where you spent it. Handled next post - MK
Third, I don't think the wolf pet will be allowed, unless it is a small wolf. Mostly because it falls into the category of something others will want to murder because it is a threat. It'd be allowed, but it would be important to remember that wolf VS armed human in a 1-on-1 fight might not end well for the human but it almost certainly won't end well for the wolf. Mora's wolf has something else going on though. I talk about in more detail in my post. - MK
Fourth, I know the summoning stone won't be allowed. It is too powerful. There are no summoning effects that powerful on site. A suggestion would be to combine it with your pet. Make it so you can summon a wolf for short periods of time. Or something along those lines. Ah, that is a reasonable suggestion. I give a few more suggestions in my post, and describe why the stone is so powerful in greater detail (mostly because the ability is vague). - MK
Fifth, everyone gets 5 minors during the grand opening. Basically a minor is an ability/item that is unique or slightly strong/cool. See the other characters for ideas of what they are. Or ask and we can help you figure some out. By the looks of it, the only thing that would qualify is the stone, but it is too strong. Wolf would qualify too. But at this point I suggest just working out the wolf/stone stuff and then seeing how many minors you have left - powerful stuff can count as more than one minor (stone as-is is still too strong though). - MK
Any questions feel free to ask here or in cbox
While I am not staff, I can help you get some of the basics set for them to look over. Edit: Thanks Udo. I've gone over things more thoroughly in the next post. - Magikeeper
First, your spells are incorrect. You need to specify which spells you have purchased, not which arts. You should also mention which level your LT is and not just its name. Just see my post, I detail the spell situation pretty thoroughly, I think. -MK
Second, it seems you are missing quite a lot of gold, and it doesn't really reflect on your sheet as to where you spent it. Handled next post - MK
Third, I don't think the wolf pet will be allowed, unless it is a small wolf. Mostly because it falls into the category of something others will want to murder because it is a threat. It'd be allowed, but it would be important to remember that wolf VS armed human in a 1-on-1 fight might not end well for the human but it almost certainly won't end well for the wolf. Mora's wolf has something else going on though. I talk about in more detail in my post. - MK
Fourth, I know the summoning stone won't be allowed. It is too powerful. There are no summoning effects that powerful on site. A suggestion would be to combine it with your pet. Make it so you can summon a wolf for short periods of time. Or something along those lines. Ah, that is a reasonable suggestion. I give a few more suggestions in my post, and describe why the stone is so powerful in greater detail (mostly because the ability is vague). - MK
Fifth, everyone gets 5 minors during the grand opening. Basically a minor is an ability/item that is unique or slightly strong/cool. See the other characters for ideas of what they are. Or ask and we can help you figure some out. By the looks of it, the only thing that would qualify is the stone, but it is too strong. Wolf would qualify too. But at this point I suggest just working out the wolf/stone stuff and then seeing how many minors you have left - powerful stuff can count as more than one minor (stone as-is is still too strong though). - MK
Any questions feel free to ask here or in cbox