12-26-2015, 04:00 AM
Quick comments while you're still putting things together:
Well of Vitality - If you could put [Ancestral Mass] next to that (with whatever formatting you prefer) that'd be appreciated. I know what it is but it would help other people less used to seeing folk rename abilities.
Tainted Well - Generally fine, people might not RP being "weary" as being very debilitating (I don't assume you intend it to be, though). As written I'd say humans can resist the healing suppression / weariness, but probably wouldn't notice the aging effect (and thus wouldn't know to actively resist it until it was too late). What do you imagine "close proximity" as being?
Peer into Darkness - Sounds fine (since you have a level 2 vital spell anyway), player controlling the target determines what is seen. I'd throw in an example as well - perhaps the spell reveals the sensation of being hated by everyone, without explaining if the target's fear is at all rational. The sensation of being powerless. The sensation of failing. Anyway, I don't think human resistance ability or similar effects applies here.
Heart of Darkness: I believe you mentioned replacing this over the chat, so I'll just wait. :o
Well of Vitality - If you could put [Ancestral Mass] next to that (with whatever formatting you prefer) that'd be appreciated. I know what it is but it would help other people less used to seeing folk rename abilities.
Tainted Well - Generally fine, people might not RP being "weary" as being very debilitating (I don't assume you intend it to be, though). As written I'd say humans can resist the healing suppression / weariness, but probably wouldn't notice the aging effect (and thus wouldn't know to actively resist it until it was too late). What do you imagine "close proximity" as being?
Peer into Darkness - Sounds fine (since you have a level 2 vital spell anyway), player controlling the target determines what is seen. I'd throw in an example as well - perhaps the spell reveals the sensation of being hated by everyone, without explaining if the target's fear is at all rational. The sensation of being powerless. The sensation of failing. Anyway, I don't think human resistance ability or similar effects applies here.
Heart of Darkness: I believe you mentioned replacing this over the chat, so I'll just wait. :o